Today I want to bring you another short fiction piece that I wrote recently. These works have mostly been simply for the purpose of exercising my writing skills again. The idea for this story actually started with the flavor text from
this card. This piece has not been edited, so there may be some minor typos or grammatical errors. Overall I enjoyed exploring the narration element of the story and how the tale circles back around to itself. I'd certainly appreciate any feedback you would like to provide.
The fire
danced and crackled in the hearth at the back of a salt-and-pepper bearded man,
dressed in the leathers of a woodsman. The wind howled in the chimney as the
winter storm raged, but all was warm and dry within the inn. The man made as if
to rise, but the children seated at the floor around him immediately protested,
clamoring for just one more tale.
"One more," he reluctantly
agreed, "and then it's off to bed with all of ya'. Now, let's see. What
shall I tell?"
There
was no shortage of suggestions from the children. On these long, dark winter
nights, the grizzled woodman's stories were often the highlight of an otherwise
dreary and boring day. Finally the man raised his hand, signaling for silence.
"Ah, I know just the story. A
very special story. One I have been saving for just the right time." Eager
eyes met his, expressions of delight and wonder staring back at him. Their
enthusiasm was infectious. "Have I told you the story of when I came face
to face with a great red dragon..."
* * *
I rode out that day with Lady Catrin
of Traegond, who had chosen to winter at Alwen Keep. It was a cold but clear
day, which gave her the opportunity to fly her dragonets. Unlike the other
ladies of the court, Lady Catrin preferred solitude on her hunts. So it was
just the two of us, miles north of the keep, riding along the edge of the
heavily forested wilderness to the north.
I remember that we spent most of
that day in silence. But any excuse to be out the keep was welcome, and
certainly her dragonets were magnificent to watch. She used neither hood nor
bindings, but merely flung the winged, serpentine creatures from her wrist, as
if they hawks and not dragonets at all. She rode that day with both a red and a
blue, and their scales glistened in the sunlight reflected off the snows. Three
hares and a black squirrel already dangled from my saddle, and with the light
fading, it was time to be heading home. But Catrin had insisted on one more
kill. And so we rode on.
Gradually, we crested a short ridge
overlooking a particularly sinister grove of trees. The tranquility of the
coming evening was suddenly interrupted by the cry of a large falcon, diving to
the ground after prey. Both dragonets immediately reacted, leaning outwards
from her lap where they were perched, as if greedy to attack this more
challenging foe. Catrin lowered her arm to the blue, which quickly crawled onto
the leather armguard. "Attack!" she cried, then flung the dragonet
into the open skies. With a loud cry, it soared straight as an arrow towards
the falcon. Somehow realizing the sudden danger, the falcon broke off its dive
and banked towards the trees, seeking protection within the thick branches.
But the dragonet was faster, diving
with talons outstretched. Within moments it collided with the falcon, and with
a loud cry both plummeted down and crashed into the trees. Catrin stood up in
her saddle, trying to see what had happened. We waited expectantly for the
victor to emerge, but both falcon and dragonet had vanished. After a moment,
Catrin shook her head and exclaimed, "I suppose we must ride down there
then and see what's become of them. Come on."
Without
another word, she rode off, plunging down the slope with seeming abandon. I had
no choice but to follow.
We quickly reached the edge of the
grove, and at last Catrin slowed her horse and clambered down from her saddle.
The red dragonet was coiled around the saddle horn and hissed at me as I pulled
my horse adjacent to hers.
"Are
you sure this is wise, my lady?" I asked.
She
looked up at me intently, and for the first time I noticed the strange violet
color of her eyes. "Wise or not, I will not abandon her."
I should have expected nothing less.
So I slid from my saddle, checked the short sword at my belt, and retrieved the
spear from its place on my saddle. "Then we best hurry, Lady Catrin. It
will be dark soon, and I do not like the look of these woods."
She gave me a strange half-smile,
then replied, "After you, ranger."
"I have a name you know," I
muttered, but did as she bade.
Within only a few steps, I knew we
were in trouble. The sweet smell of decay hung heavy in the air, and thick
strands of cobweb were strung among the trees. I had heard stories of the
monstrous spiders that inhabited the wilderness to our north. I had no desire
to encounter one.
Catrin stopped behind me, and she
whispered, "Do you hear that?"
I paused, then I heard it too. It
sounded like a large creature, struggling as if caught in a trap.
"We
must hurry!" she cried.
Against all reason, I plunged
quickly through the tangled branches of the trees, drawing closer to the
sounds. And then I saw it.
A massive spider web, with strands
of silk as thick as my arm, was suspended between two large trees. Blobs of
flesh and silk hung suspended all around it. And both the falcon and the blue
dragonet were caught within the web. Both thrashed wildly, but their struggles
only seemed to trap them further.
And
then, in a sudden blur of motion, the giant spider pounced.
It
moved impossibly fast, leaping upon the struggling falcon. It bit down once,
twice, and then a torrent of silk rushed forth from its abdomen. Guided by its
long limbs, the silken strands quickly enveloped the hapless bird. Its
struggles quickly slowed, and within moments it was only other bulbous sack of
silk hanging from the web.
"Do something!" Catrin
shouted.
I drew my blade and sliced into the
web, expecting it to shear apart effortlessly. Instead, it felt like chopping
into a snowbank. The strands split, but my swing lacked the force to slice
neatly through them. With all my effort, I managed to pull it free. I took
another swipe, hoping somehow to cut the dragonet free, but I knew my chances
were slim.
"Watch out!" Catrin
cried.
I leapt back, sword tumbling from my
grasp as the spider leapt towards me. It barely missed, and immediately I
lifted my spear and sought to impale the monstrous creature. But it
effortlessly leaped back across the web and out of my reach. And there it
paused, its bundle of eyes staring back at me.
At that moment the dragonet, which
had stilled for a moment, gave out a pitiful cry and renewed its struggles to
free itself from the web. In response, the spider cautiously began to crawl in
its direction, but its attention was clearly focused on me. I raised the spear,
as if to throw, and it dodged to the side. Perhaps if I could keep it
distracted long enough...
Then
it leapt straight at me.
Somehow
it knocked aside my spear, its massive body knocking me to the forest floor. I
struggled to throw it off, but for all my efforts all I managed to do was keep
its fangs from clamping down on me. One bite, I knew, and I would end up
rotting in my own silken sack.
"Enough!" Catrin suddenly
cried. I watched, dumbstruck, as she grabbed the spider in both her hands.
There was a sound like the cracking of an egg, and she ripped the monstrous
creature in half, green gore flying in all directions. In the fading light, her
eyes blazed violet as she flung the corpse down. Then she grabbed the web and
pulled hard, ripping it free. With surprising gentleness she took the thrashing
dragonet in her arms and methodically pulled the strands from it.
I lay there, in shock, my mind
refusing to accept what I had just seen. I tried to speak, but all I could
mutter was nonsense.
Catrin
turned her bright gaze upon me, and suddenly there was a flash of light,
brighter than lightning crashing down. In that instant, the noblewoman
disappeared, and I found myself staring into the maw of a great red dragon.
* * *
The man let the silence grow, as the
faces of the gathered children peered back at him. He smiled, then said,
"And that's where we'll end the story for tonight."
The
children groaned and protested, but the man would not be dissuaded. Parents
herded them away, bidding him goodnight. As they departed, a noblewoman rose
from one of the far tables, gliding over to the woodsman still seated by the
fire.
"You take a great risk, you
know, telling that story here," she said.
He smiled, and stared intently into
her beautiful violet eyes.
"It is no
risk, beloved. For who would ever believe that a woman is a dragon?"
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